The Prezi needs many more stopping points for a higher grade - this would struggle to get level 2 in fact (E), so you really need to look at it again. The first point uses a colour that can't be read on the busy and colourful background. You need much more detail in each of the tech you identify, and as I showed you in the exemplar work in the lesson, each tech should be described in detail (what it contributed), and then your own (personal and group) use of it needs to be evaluated (strengths and weaknesses of your use of it). Don't use headings Pros and Cons, as you're not supposed to be evaluating the equipment, but your use of it. Look at exemplar.
This is better Sam, but there are still too few slides here for higher than top 2/low 3. You should include still images and moving images as illustrations of your points about camera usage. Each separate technology needs a separate section (key general points about the tech and your use of it, and then crucially you need to have branches off which discuss the detail of the tech (eg for Final Cut you should discuss your use of precise tools, and the same for the camera, garageband, indesign etc etc). Aim for at least 30 slides, but level 4 answers are often 50 slides.
The Prezi needs many more stopping points for a higher grade - this would struggle to get level 2 in fact (E), so you really need to look at it again. The first point uses a colour that can't be read on the busy and colourful background. You need much more detail in each of the tech you identify, and as I showed you in the exemplar work in the lesson, each tech should be described in detail (what it contributed), and then your own (personal and group) use of it needs to be evaluated (strengths and weaknesses of your use of it). Don't use headings Pros and Cons, as you're not supposed to be evaluating the equipment, but your use of it. Look at exemplar.
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ReplyDeleteThis is better Sam, but there are still too few slides here for higher than top 2/low 3. You should include still images and moving images as illustrations of your points about camera usage. Each separate technology needs a separate section (key general points about the tech and your use of it, and then crucially you need to have branches off which discuss the detail of the tech (eg for Final Cut you should discuss your use of precise tools, and the same for the camera, garageband, indesign etc etc). Aim for at least 30 slides, but level 4 answers are often 50 slides.
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